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November 7th, 2007

Season 4, week 1: Fishing for freedom @ 12:16 pm

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From:spydielives
Date:November 8th, 2007 09:35 pm (UTC)
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*with some trepidation*

I liked this entry. My "grade" was 4/5.

There were a few typos, punctuation mostly. There were couple of grammar issues, but nothing especially distracting. There is a problem with the HTML.

The big thing: the paragraphs were long, and hard to not skip.

I am not a professional or anything, so you can take or leave what I say. The lower mark was almost all with presentation, and very little to do with content.
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From:djner
Date:November 9th, 2007 01:32 am (UTC)
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Thanks for the "grade". What I did as far as getting it pasted in is that I pasted it in as text. I had the option to past in as html and since I wrote it in Word, I probably should have done that. Next time, if tehre is one, please let me know if I do this) if the pasting as html helps. I've always had issue with putting too many commas in. I'm not a professional either, that's why I'm here. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Ner's Random Musings on a life of interesting insights

a world of interesting factoids about nothing and everything